Need to "pop" the white on the flower. Too shadowy.
on Jan 20
This is an excellent floral close-up with nice detail and and color. The plain dark background sets the blossoms off well. I might have preferred a bit more light and/or brightness on the main bloom, but I do appreciate the detail in both the white and red areas. I would also like to see a little more space on the right and bottom for the flower to reach into.